2nd version of 1st haiku

Transformation

Caterpillar spins

increments of commitment—

Butterfly flies free!

Tags: another version, haiku, transformation, transformed

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One Response to “2nd version of 1st haiku”

Ken Chawkin Says:
December 31, 2009 at 11:16 pm | Reply
I prefer the original version of my first haiku.

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