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2nd version of 1st haiku

Transformation


Caterpillar spins

increments of commitment—

Butterfly flies free!

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This entry was posted on October 2, 2009 at 4:01 am and is filed under My poems, Poetry. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

One Response to “2nd version of 1st haiku”

  1. Ken Chawkin Says:
    December 31, 2009 at 11:16 pm | Reply

    I prefer the original version of my first haiku.

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